Diana Metz

The Prophecy Continues...

December 18, 2008

He Knows…

Filed under: General — Diana @ 1:31 pm

The frost on the windows cheered my heart. It wouldn’t be long now. Tomorrow was Christmas! The thin tree in the parlor was beautifully decorated with paper chains and popcorn strings. Paper snowflakes adorned the windows while real ones accumulated outside. The sweet and spicy smell of gingerbread filled the house. Paul would sneak a frosted little man from the jar after breakfast, checking off one of his tasks from the List.

The List was well hidden behind the drawing of the Christmas Angel on Sally’s wall. We took it down late at night and made our tallies. Naughty or Nice. The balance must not be too close. Everyone had assigned tasks to keep the balance in our favor or our stockings wouldn’t be filled on Christmas morning. Even Joshua, who was only three, knew what he had to do. Things have to be done carefully; it wouldn’t count if mother knew what we were doing.

The kitchen was the warmest place in the house, so we all sat around the morning table. Sally dished up oatmeal and carefully rationing out the sugar, slipping herself two extra spoonfuls (one mark for her). Morgan brought in icy buckets of water, innocently tracking in snow and mud (a mark for him). I took two red, shiny apples from my coat pocket and put them on the table. Mother loves apples and Mr. O’Connor won’t miss them (a mark for me). Anne put a fork on Morgan’s chair and laughed when he sat on it (a mark for her). Joshua laughed with Anne and merrily tipped his bowl of oatmeal on the floor (a mark for him). Mother shooed us from the kitchen.

With only a few hours before Christmas we had to work hard to make it on St. Nicholas’s list. Morgan was to deliver groceries. Anne was helping Mother with the baking. Sally had choir practice at the church. And I was to keep out of the way. There was plenty of opportunity for us to fill in the List. The morning seemed to drag on forever. The puzzle was too hard and Joshy ate three pieces. I gathered up the dry pine needles from under the Christmas tree and played with the crispy pile until Mother called me for lunch. I hid the needles under the sofa.

We all had to dress up after lunch to visit our cousins. It was hard to sit still while Aunt Virginia rambled on about Peter’s perfect marks in school and Winnie’s role in the nativity play. The cake she gave us was too dry and the tea too sweet. Aunt Virginia asked Sally to sing. I really wanted to hit Peter when he laughed at Sally behind a pillow. None of us wanted to be there, but we sat and smiled sweetly. All that proper behavior was too much for us. On the walk home I jumped in a mud puddle and splattered Anne’s dress. She pushed me hard and knocked me against the chestnut cart. Morgan threw a snowball at Mr. Collins’ carriage. Only Sally, carrying Joshy, walked quietly next to Mother. The little brat made faces at passersby. The balance of our List was tipping.

After a quiet supper we sat around the parlor and listened to Father read the nativity story and we set each character from the story around the manger. We sang carols and drank eggnog. Before we were sent to our beds we hung our stockings from the fireplace mantle. After hugs, we climbed the stairs. We met in Sally’s room and took down the List. We tallied everything up. It would be close. Morgan and I went back to our room. We couldn’t resist jumping on the beds just a few times before sliding under the blankets. I could hear the girls giggling through the wall. Morgan promised he would stay up until St. Nicholas arrived. I couldn’t stay awake any longer.

I woke up to the church bells and pulled Morgan out of bed. Robes and slippers were pulled on and we ran to wake the girls. We all ran down stairs. Mother was already up, taking sweet rolls out of the oven. Father stamped the snow from his feet as he came through the back door. He smiled and held out five beautifully bright oranges. We cheered and ran to give him a Christmas hug. When Mother’s hands were free we gathered around her as well. With a kiss, she ushered us into the parlor.

The tree was lit with candles and seven neatly wrapped packages sat under the lowest boughs. We all ran to our stocking, which were bulging and lumpy. I peeked inside and smiled. I took my stocking to Father and held it out. Morgan, Anne, and Sally did the same. Baffled, Father took my stocking and looked at the gift St. Nicholas had left me. He glanced up with surprise and showed the stocking to Mother. Tears filled our parents’ eyes.

Joshua, free of Mother’s watchful eye, toddled to the fireplace. With a squeal, he pulled down his own stocking. The contents tumbled out around him. My tiny brother grinned happily and tried to take a bite of the lump of coal. Father laughed and picked Joshy up, not caring that the small hands were leaving black streaks on his dressing gown.

“Come, Martha,” Father said, carrying Joshy and the stockings to the fireplace. “We will have a warm Christmas this year, thanks to our naughty little children.”

December 6, 2008

1-A-Day and Daily To-Do

Filed under: General — Diana @ 9:09 am

1 A-Day

Read 1 Good Thing
Say 1 Good Thing
Write 1 Good Thing
Do 1 Good Thing
Eat 1 Good Thing
Dream 1 Good Thing
Look at 1 Good Thing
Appriciate 1 Good Thing

 

Daily To-Do

Smile
Laugh
Write
Sing
Scream
Be Crude
Be Rude
Be in Love

December 2, 2008

GET OUT OF MY HEAD!

Filed under: General, Writing — Diana @ 11:09 am

There are several reasons I haven’t read many books over the past years.

1. There are some poorly written books out there, and I find it painful to read them (sorry Mary Shelley).

2. It’s hard to read a good book or story and not get ideas. Really good books make me want to run to the computer and start writing (not very condusive to vegging on the couch with a paperback).

3. Plagiarism, unintentional of course. It’s very hard to not let other writers’ ideas seep into your work. A good book remains in your memory, weaving into your sub-consciousness. Sometimes I can catch an all-too-familiar name or phrase or action in time to twist it into my own. Other times I don’t realize at all that I’ve “borrowed”.  It’s also very hard to come up with totally new things. For example: in Talon I use a set of rings as a plot prop, these are not like the One Ring. I also try to describe the method of magic used in my books, but it’s very close to one or more authors’ description. UGH!

Here is where my rant leads to:
I am wanting to have a special “stone” in my latest book but how close am I getting to David Eddings’ Orb of Aldur? And just how far do I have to move away from the Orb before I feel comfortable that no one will make the comparison?
This also comes into play when I think of stories I want to write and know that some idiot will assume I’m using another author’s idea. Long before Harry Potter, I have wanted to write about a school that teaching that art of magic but now that story is overshadowed by the inevitable comparisons.

Originality is hard to come by and so I shield my unconscious from the possible infiltration of ideas. Isn’t that a bummer?

November 20, 2008

They’re Back

Filed under: General, Writing — Diana @ 11:34 am

After many many months of silence, the voices have returned.
This could be because I had a lot of free time on my hands waiting for the long queue on my Warcraft server.

Due, in part, to The World of Warcraft and the class of Druid, I did some research into the REAL druids from antiquity. I was surprised to learn that very little is known about the first druids. Most ancient writings were greatly fictionalized so that a true history cannot be verified.
So I took what I could find and tried to bring it into the modern world. My main character, Heather, was easy going and spoke clearly to me, but I could not settle on a villain or even the main conflict.
Of course I could not just have the typical “fight for the environment against the encroaching industrialism” that would just be BORING. I did think of having new-age druids trying to keep the real-thing from taking power but that wasn’t conflicting enough.
My daughter suggested getting out of modern times and I agreed. My husband thought it would be interesting to do bring in an enemy like the Romans linking it back to the “real” history and that sounded good too.

So…
Heather is now shifted into a pre-industrial setting with an imminent invasion causing conflict. Of course the setting has to be fictional in order to have a strong female character but I like that better because that keeps me from having to research “real” history.
Heather is a normal teenager, as I like all my characters to be, who has to be extra-ordinary or succeed by being normal. She won’t like being dragged from her home and be uncertain of her new home and unwilling to go along with a rising group of nature worshipers.
I’m still not sure what the main villain or conflict will be but it won’t be a lecture on keeping the environment safe.

I feel quite rusty as I work on this storyline. I used to be able to spew words onto the computer screen, now I stutter.
I hope to have more info soon.

January 17, 2008

Writer’s Lag

Filed under: General, Writing — Diana @ 3:17 pm

Yes, I haven’t been keeping up with my blog. Lazy? Yes, very. I haven’t been writing much at all these past several months. Oh, I get the odd creative flash from time to time (sometimes very odd indeed), but I haven’t had the passion to run away with a story idea. I could use the excuse that I’ve lost interest since my books are out of print and I haven’t found a new publisher but that’s only a very small plop in my procrastination bucket. The passion has gone out of my pen, I don’t feel the drive to FINISH a piece, I have lost touch with my audience and lost the fire that was the dream of being a famous writer.

Oh, I have played with bits of ideas:

Cloning and the effects of falling in love with the “Other You”
What if the dead live on in the same reality as we do, just…not physically touching.
Can a dragon and wizard fall in love?
Can a pacifist healer and a warrior become friends?
What happens when robots learn to lie.

But I just haven’t fleshed them out much.

My job takes up a lot of the time I used to have to write, and World of Warcraft takes up most of the rest. I still hear the voices of characters longing to be inked and see settings behind closed eyes. I have not given up writing, that would be impossible, but I have severe Writer’s Lag.

Thank you, for wandering in here to check up on me.

Diana

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